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HVR - James's avatar

I guess he warned us all about parting, didn't he?

Elijah Westin's avatar

Goddd I feel this right nowwww..

So well written, so relatable.

Kiwi’s Stories's avatar

Thank you 💜

Andrea (Andy) Curran 🌄's avatar

Beautiful and strong imagery! ❤️❤️❤️

Kiwi’s Stories's avatar

Thank you so much 🥹💜

I.P.'s avatar

This was beautiful Kiwi❤️❤️❤️

Kiwi’s Stories's avatar

Thank you I.P. 🥹💜

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

There’s something very real in how this keeps returning, no matter how much you try to leave it.

That line about the ink bleeding stayed with me.

Thank you for sharing this.

Kiwi’s Stories's avatar

Thank you so much reading, means a lot 🫶🏻

Fiona Bridges's avatar

Been there

Kiwi’s Stories's avatar

😔💜 I’m sorry

Fiona Bridges's avatar

Same to you my friend.

Fiona Bridges's avatar

❤️❤️❤️

The stranger's avatar

OMG!! I REALLY LOVED IT

THE WHOLE STORY/POEM IS JUST WHAT I NEEDED TO READ NOW ❤️‍🔥

WELL DONE, KIWI 🥝🔥

Kiwi’s Stories's avatar

Thank you so much!!! <3

The stranger's avatar

You're welcome K 🥝

Loved it!

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

Wow love this one!!! 😍